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Everyone can write.
Unlike "Futuristic Story", here we go to the past... really past. In times before Homo sapiens sapiens.
We will make different stories - with base in the 3 dinosaur periods. We'll create a history before dinos, in dinos time and after dinosaurs time (but before the start of History, just to Pre-homo sapiens).
So I'm going to base on stuff I watch on TV, stories of dinos that go to National Geographic Chanell, History Channel, Discovery Civilisation (in 'Dino Planet' series - I just love it!) and Odisseia (Portugal and Spain channel).
So let's start with... (just invent stuff, but based in tru facts - go to Google. I love dinosaurs and ancient mammals and even animals before them. I'll be in the Palaeontology sector working on Prehistory Science. I love Prehistory since I was 4.
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Vecci, the Velociraptor
Main Character: Vecci
Age: 1 year
Species: Velociraptor mongoliensis - #Note: The Velociraptor is NOT like the one in Jurassic Park.
IMG:https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/2/2f/Velociraptor_mongoliensis_jmallon.jpg/220px-Velociraptor_mongoliensis_jmallon.jpg

Period: Cretaceous
Description: Vecci is a really fast and light, with 13 kg. He was separated by his raptor group and now alone in the dark forest. Will he go out of the dark forest full of Tyrannosaurus or find a mate?

That's the main index. It will be regularly updated.

• Let's begin the story...
One day Vecci was soooo hungry he could eat a full Plesiosaurs. Suddenly he found...
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He closed because it had spam and flame. Untill now, this doesn't! You should've read his answer...
Please don't flame here then.

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Updated post! Now it's pretty clean!
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Okay ill continue

Suddenly he found a strange shiny object that resembled metal but was too hard for it.He was so surprised by that things shiny appearance that he forgot his hunger.He tried to chew it but it was impossible.He tried to claw it but it was futile. After sometime his friend from other clan named(what to name them extended?) their appearance was very heavy and their hide was so tough and rough that even laser couldn't pierce it.

His name was Goldac of clan (enter some name here)
He was the member of the clan but was still a child.Goldac
asked vecci "what are you doing so faraway from your clan?" Vecci was just about to say something but Goldac's eye got the glimpse of the shiny object in Vecci's hand. he asked Vecci "hey Vecci whats the thing that you are hiding with you?Come on you can show me because i wont tell it to the elders unlike the sneaky boy zagurath"(add him to the velociraptor clan)

My part ends here
lets see the others

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It's a group, btw. Velociraptors worked in small groups to hunt big grass-eaters.
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So Vecci joined Sal (hope you like name), travelling a couple of hours and then suddenly they just got out of the dark forest and saw a shiny day.
Sal: Here we are. At Goldac's territory.
Vecci eyes burned, he wasn't used to the Sun.
He though it was beautiful. Some elders and adults were eating a small mammal like starving chainsaws, Sal spoke with the leader about Vecci. The leader said that Vec' could enter if he did a little job for them...
The job was...


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We can use some 'fantasy based on real', you know? Like speaking dinos (but in their language) and stuff.

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playa slaya has written
Xt3nd3d is this about a dinosour named vecci?

I just named him that way based on 'Dino Planet'.
I've saw a episode about a Daspletosaurus that scientists named "Little Das".
Now Vecci doesn't really exists, it's a name I invented. Sure that Velociraptors existed. This sotry is based on real facts about Raptors but with some fantasy mixed in. You can invent what ever you want - but not too false or impossible. You can use 'talk' between dinosaurs - not real, a bit fantasy but allowed.

Review of the story so far: Vecci was alone but then found Sal - a Velociraptor from the Goldac Group*. Vecci joined Sal and his friend promised he will add Vec' to the group. The leader of that group said Vecci could join, but he'll have to do some 'jobs'/'favours' to them, that are... // Now anybody continues

I recommend Google and Wikipedia to have facts about raptors.

*: Scientists proved that Velociraptors probably had groups, so they could hunt more easily in group.

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...bring some meat and other resources.
Vecci: Farewell, I'll try to do that, but can Sal come with me?
Leader approved.
They started their journey for hours and then...
Sal: Vecci, look! A small oviraptor. Meat!!
The oviraptor looked to them and said: "Please, don't me hurt! Meat? No! No! Me no meat! Me knows where meat".
Vecci: Well, well... ok, we'll see that. What's your name and from witch group you come?
He affirmed he was from the Eggas, but left it because they didn't give any attention to their kids like him and needed to have a new life. He came very far a and saw lots of great places, including a play full of small mammals they could hunt. His name is Ovec.
Sal: Should we trust a egg raptor? Velociraptors are your enemies for stealing our eggs!
Ovec: No! There one of other reasons me out Eggas. Me no like eggs.
Sal: We'll see that... now.. let's hunt!
They turned the way to North, following Ovec's indications. Suddenly, night arrived.
Vecci: Let's stop here and rest. I'm sooo tired.
The others liked the idea. But they didn't knew that they were at a Tyrannosaurus Rex egg nest.
They waked up in that morning and...

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They were lying on some silver rock.
Little time after rock moved.
Veccii: growl graaaurrrrrarrararrr (this isn't a rock, this is a Tyrannosaurus Rex! Run!)
Ovec: growl growl grrrraaauuurrrr (haha i have did this on purpose, im faster runner than you and t-rex
will hunt you not me, this is revenge you wanted to eat me, bye)
Sal: grrrrrraauuuurr grrrrrrrraaa (i knew he was lying!)
T-rex was chasing them, but suddenly...
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